Colour Poem

For the past few days Miss Goslin's literacy class made a Colour poem about what it looks like, tastes like, and feels like. It made me relaxed when I wrote it because it was fun to write about a colour and what experiences that the colour means. We had to focus a lot to get it finished. This is my Colour poem, comment for some feedback about my writing.

Once upon a time...

This week in writing we wrote a six sentence story about creating a character and adding detail. Our focus was on creating sentences. We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence are, that a sentence must make sense and your sentences has to have one idea, and the third one is your sentences has to have a space (  ) next to each word and last but not least the fourth one is that you have to have a capital letter at the start of your sentence and a full stop at the end. The thing I thought was quite challenging was that we had to create a character and think of one really fast. This is my Six sentence story, comment for some feedback if you want too.

Be the Change!

Today the 19th of March 2019 in Puni-o-Toka we had to make a kindness poem about what kindness means to ourself, I was excited to make a poem because I loved to make them, it took quite a lot of thinking about it, it was easy at the same time this is my poem about kindness.

Lipogram Dark Dragon!

On the 14 of March Miss Goslins Litercy class wrote about a lipogram of a dragon and two boys fighting it, we had to do a sentence without using the letter "i" it was quite hard to think about but it was fun at the same time. This is my writing and the picture of the dragon. 

Wanna learn more About Me! Learn more by reading this!

In Cyber Smart this week we have been learning about Shortcut keys, we made a google doc and I named it 'All about me' and we had to blog about it. The thing that I thought was challenging was how we had to make you writing inserting because you had to think very hard, and the thing that I thought that was easy was when I make the writing text different colours and take a screenshot. Don't forgot to read my question at the bottom of my writing, and feel free to give me some feedback!