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Tuesday, July 3, 2018

My Miserable Peom

The last few weeks we have been learning about the feelings in our writing. I did Miserable and Joyful, I did what it looks like and what it tastes like, and sounds like also what it Smells like. I hope you like it. BYE!!
MISERABLE!!!!!
Miserable is a feeling when somebody is unhappy.


Miserable looks like someone walking around with a sad face.


Miserable feels like a  boring day, not fun day and when you can not do anything around yourself.


Miserable sounds like quiet in your head and nobody talking cause you are having a boring and miserable day.


Miserable tastes like an unhappy food that tastes yucky inside your mouth.


Miserable smells like stinky socks that have been in the rubbish bin for 2 years.   
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I was sailing around in the ocean of the joyful  waves as they rushed over eachother. But then the ocean was not a joyful ocean anymore it was the most boring ocean EVER!!!!!!!! Joyful is a word that is a yellow  and a crystal clear colour, and boring is a word that is grey and has no bright colours in it. Then i could hear the GINOERMOUS waves get bigger and bigger…




THE END!!!!!!!!




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