I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, September 6, 2018
10 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi i am Eduarda from South Hornby School i like your poem of hokey pokey is really yum is a taste of carmel is look amazing your job
ReplyDeleteThank you Eduarda and you dont have to write what school you go to cause i go to your school and also thank you again, and it is really yummy and it smells like carmel its really yum. Bye
DeleteHi Erin Nici Here
ReplyDeleteI really Like Your Poem. Maybe Next Time You Could Make The Writing A Little Bit Bigger. How Did You Get The Smell And All The Photos?
Love To Hear Back
Blog You Later
Nici
I got the images from google and dont worry I pushed labled for reused, and I got the smell when I ate it and wrote about it, didn't you do that too?
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hi how are you
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Good i am fine, how are you?
DeleteOf course im good how about you?
DeleteI am fine did you like my writing about hokey pokey?
Deletekia ora ERIN I LIKE your hokey pokey next time you could add in the blurb how you made it ok bye bye
ReplyDelete_ JORDAN
Thank you Jordan and next time I should make a blurb how I made the thing. And later I might comment on your blog about your work. And thanks again Bye.
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