I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, July 5, 2019
Celebration
For the past few days Miss Goslins Litercys class had to make a Google Drawing of your last Celebration that you have had. My last Celebration was my Brothers 14th Birthday. This is my Google Drawing I did.
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Kia Ora Erin, I like how you did a google drawing of a cake and birthday flags it looks cool I think next time you could add a bigger blurb if you found easy or hard to make your post it reminds me when I had to make a birthday card for my mum it was easy and fun, i think your brother will love what you make for him, and the details looked awesome. What's your favorite cake flavor? mine is chocolate with icing on top. BYE
ReplyDelete- Eduarda
No offence Eduarda, but aren't you allergic to milk???
DeleteHI Erin I like how you did the cool minty green flags and the cake is very creative maybe next time you could add more of a blurb but over all I loved it and I think your brother will like what you did for him BYE
ReplyDeleteKaela
Hello it's Leala I like your blog it is very interesting.In my class we have been doing Google drawing to.I think that you could of added some more colder.Was it haed to do a Google drawing.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Erin its me Riansha I like your cake, decorations and the plate underneath it is very creative. Next time you could add some presents.
ReplyDelete-Riansha