Kia Ora!
Last Week in Mrs Jones Writing Group we did another Haiku Poem about anything we want to use in our Haiku Poem. It had to have 5 Syllables, 7 Syllables, 5 Syllables. It is a mystery so I can't say what the object is. This is my Poem!
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 6, 2020
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Hi Erin its Eduarda from HHS here at school we did poems as well such as haikus too me and Hollie.E think is a rugby ball about your haiku Its really good and the background looks really good.
ReplyDeleteDid me and Hollie get it right?
-Eduarda :)
Hi Eduarda, Thank you for commenting on my blog. Thats cool that you have been doing haiku poems. We also have been doing them too. You didn't get it right because it was a soccer ball you were very close to getting it. Thank you again for commenting!
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-Erin :3