Persuade Gaming Addiction

 こんにちは ( Hello )

For the past few days my group in Writing has been writing about 'Gaming Addiction.' My argument is that we should persuade children not to play video games. We had to start with a introduction and then our argument about why gaming should be banned. Then our 4 main ideas, and then for the end was our conclusion. Before all of this we did a hamburger plan so we could copy all of our ideas onto a template which made the ideas come together. This is my writing.

Do you think gaming should be banned or no ??

In my opinion I think children shouldn’t be able to play video games.

I think this because children are watching too much violence and watching bad content, the main point is that too many video games have violent, inappropriate content.

Another reason is sleeping, where lots of kids spend their day and night on video games which causes sleeping problems so people don’t get enough sleep and energy.

Also kids under the age of 12 are addicted to inappropriate and violent video games. There’s also a thing called gaming disorder ( internet gaming ), which causes depression, and gambling.

Lots of parents say that gaming is not very educational for their kids so they tell them to get off their devices and tell them to go outside and do some activities to get them active, because they will gain weight and not have enough strength to do other things like school activities.

Children should not be able to play video games because of the violence and inappropriate content.