Tuesday, April 9, 2019
A moment in time at Haswell Quarry!
For the past few days Miss Goslins literacy class wrote about a Moment in time and the Haswell Quarry we used our senses in our story like what it smelt like, what it felt like, and also what it looks like. This is my writing about a Moment in time at the Haswell Quarry. Comment down below for some if you have some feedback, Bye!
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Erin, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your story. I like your sentence 'I could smell the victory', very cool sentence. Next time I would like you to self check your work so you can see if it makes sense.
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Miss Goslin
Hi Miss Goslin,
DeleteThank you for commeting on my blog post and giving me feedback. Next time I should of self checked my writing I fortgot to self check it. Thank you Bye!
-Erin