Soar Writing

On the 13th of May in Mrs Jones Writing group we watched a video called Soar. After that we brainstormed our ideas from the video and the brainstorming ideas was used for our plan in our writing. I really liked writing about the video because it made me feel very warm inside and just a good feeling. I wasn't there at the Mrs Jones google hangout because I had some technical difficulties. But I still did the work! Anyways this is my writing.

What is a video that made you have a good feeling or warm inside?

One fall day there was a little girl who lived with her grandparents, she had a dream to be a pilot and she liked to build mini planes.

The little girl had a white long sleeved shirt that had a small little aeroplane picture on it, she also had a brown button skirt and most of all she had funky looking glasses and a hat for her head. She loved to make aeroplanes that drifted off in the sunlight.

But one day she all of a sudden came across the little bag that fell on her head. She looked confused so she had a little look at it but she didn’t open it because she might have thought it was someone else's and not for her to open. Then a little miniature machine crashed into the tree. It gave the little girl a fright.

Then out came a boy he was teeny tiny! But the small bag belonged to him so he picked it up and then he saw the girl, he was startled. He grabbed the pencil because he was so frightened that she was going to hurt him. 

They both had a glance at each other and the little boy quickly ran to his machine but then his machine fell off and broke… 

The miniature boy was so upset but then the girl thought of an idea! She gathered up all of her pencils and then used it to make the machine fly! Then it fell off and rolled up to her aeroplane and she thought of her next idea. She tied the machine to her aeroplane to see if that would work. But then it fell once again.

They were almost about to give up. But until her plan of what she was going to build for her next aeroplane hit her with a brain wave! She thought this idea must work or otherwise the little boy wouldn’t be able to fly back to his friends!

They tried and tried and then they made an amazing machine for the little boy. It was a success! So the miniature boy flew off into the sunset. 

Then he got out a star from his small little bag! He put it up and it floated. It was so pretty! Then he waved his hand in front of the star and the girl saw that the boy was giving a sign that he was there!