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Wednesday, March 25, 2020

Describing Goldilocks

For the past few days in Mrs Jones writing group we have been writing a story on Describing Goldilocks. My favourite part in the story is when she explores the woods and pats all the little bunny rabbits. But my least favourite part in the story was that she lied to her Mother. This is what my writing was.

Far in the edge of the woods lived a girl named Goldilocks, she lived in a little wood cottage by a big rose bush, she loved to pick lots of flowers for her friends and especially her mother.

Goldilocks had warm blue vibrant eyes and a blue dress that twirls in the hot shiny sun. She has short wavy golden blonde hair.

Goldilocks loves to take long strolls down through the forest, mostly she loves the beautiful flowers. Goldilocks Mother describes her as helpful, adventurous.

She often takes the path that leads her to the massive green field filled with lots of sunlight, she loves to run through the fresh light green grass.

Have you heard of the story Goldilocks and the Three Bears and whats your favourite part in the story?

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