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Wednesday, March 25, 2020

Recount Writing

In Mrs Jones Writing group we did a writing Recount about our Weekend I wrote about my friend coming over for a sleepover. My favourite thing about writing this recount was because I was thinking back on what I did and it was really fun. The most trickiest thing was to think of all the things I need in my writing like for example adjectives, punctuation. This is what I did!

Dear Diary,
Today I’m going to tell you about my weekend. 
On Friday (the day before I had a sleepover with my friend) I went to the park with my Dad and Brother,
I was feeling happy but puffed because I was doing lots of running.


There was a lot of people at the park because it was really hot.
Sometimes its really weird because when its really windy and cloudy its still very hot.
I like the park but I also like surfing at Sumner beach so I wish I did that.


The Next day which was Saturday my friend Arwen came over
to my house at 1:23 for a sleepover she brang her skateboard and I used my
skateboard to so we went down to the park.
We are not professionals but we tried we fell over sometimes but then we got back up it was quite funny.



At 3:00 we watched some YouTube videos for about half an hour.
Later on we had McDonald's for dinner it was so yum!

What fun things do you do at your sleepover?

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